I can't really decide which side of the argument that i am on. I don't necessarily have an opinion on either side of this argument. but i do still have a couple of points that i hope to get across to you.
First off words are just words they aren't physically going to come and attack you. If you think that they will then you are wrong and at my best recommendation should go see a doctor or therapist. Since they are just words you get to choose just how much offense or joy you take from those words. Be yourself, but still heed the words of people wiser then you.
Second just because the words said to you maybe doesn't affect you directly that doesn't mean that it won't affect someone in a way that is bad. Every person is different, and without different types of people society would not function the way it does today. Some people aspire to be Doctors when they grow up and maybe others want to be a teacher. Without either one of those people there is no way we would be the way we are now.
Thirdly: words kill. I would say that about 99% of all wars are started by words. Either written or said they both can kill. The Cold War was started AND ended by words not conflict alone as is all other wars. Just because one side loses the most people doesn't mean that they lost the argument. Words are not to be taken lightly.
So over all words can be used as a tool for peace and love, or to fuel hatred and malice. Words are not to be taken lightly, but still have fun in your life, but not at anothers expense.
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I really like that you used an actual even like the Cold War to try and get your point across. I like that you said "So over all words can be used as a tool for peace and love, or to fuel hatred and malice. Words are not to be taken lightly, but still have fun in your life, but not at anothers expense." Because i do believe that words can be strong and inspiring, but you should be carful at which words you pay mind to. I like that you gave a percentage it makes it look pretty legit.
ReplyDeleteI did not find any mistakes. I think that your grammar was really nice...haha I believe you used your commas in the right spots. I Think you could use some quotes that go along with uses of words.
I think a good job at using your words and space. I like how you stated each paragraph out with first, second, third, over all etc... Goood Job!
I like that idea that you pointed out saying "words are just words they aren't physically going to come and attack you" Because I think that is so true and we are the ones who let the words get to us.
ReplyDeleteI like how you split up your points and didn't just go on and on about each of idea you covered them enough and got to the point.
Good Job I think it was really well written.
Ideas: I like the idea behind this. All the word choses and thoghts a great. I think maybe just expand on the whole war thought abit.
ReplyDeleteDetails: I think your details are good. I think maybe just a bit more on the war idea.
So What: I get the point your trying to make you did a good job explaning in my eyes.